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  1. GeordieLee

    GeordieLee Registered User

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    Smoooooooooooooth.
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  2. naughtybut nice

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    Thnx babe!
    I always write in dutch.
    Find it harder to write in english as it's my second language.
    What I've done in english so far, is not very good!:lol:
    But am hopefully going to do a course in english literature.
    naughtybut nice, May 17, 2006
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  3. GeordieLee

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    Re: Re: Re: Poem

    Do you sound Geordie or Dutch?
    GeordieLee, May 17, 2006
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  4. naughtybut nice

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    lol
    naughtybut nice, May 17, 2006
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  5. naughtybut nice

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    My mates say I sound like a dutch geordie.
    My mam's from Newcastle, so am half and half! lol
    naughtybut nice, May 17, 2006
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  6. J

    J Mummy To A Baby Boy

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    Didn’t realise you were Dutch! Your English seems fine if you need some advice on english courses drop me a pm
    J, May 17, 2006
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  7. J

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    Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Poem

    :clap: :doh:
    J, May 17, 2006
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  8. Mad4it

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    instead of couplets, try breaking them up.

    i.e sentance a
    sentance b
    sentance c
    sentance d

    rhyme a&c b&d

    I might be talking bollocks.
    Mad4it, May 17, 2006
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  9. J

    J Mummy To A Baby Boy

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    :lol:
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    nope that would be written
    sentance a
    sentance b
    sentance a
    sentance b
    :D fresh outta school that one lol
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  11. Mad4it

    Mad4it Faster than a cannonball

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    I used to be double good at poetry whilst I was at school all those years ago, oh where did those days go, they were all so long ago, my rhymes totally blow.
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  12. Mad4it

    Mad4it Faster than a cannonball

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    6 of 1 mate
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  13. J

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    :) :lol:

    got any other examples?
    J, May 17, 2006
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    No need for special underwear, just wear trousers and tuck them into the top of your socks.
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  15. B.O.B.

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    I just got one of them two minutes ago. Tucking in trousers as we speak!
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    Good luck :up:
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  17. Alexander

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    poems are a bit girly therefore i think its bot
    Alexander, May 17, 2006
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  18. B.O.B.

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    And saying 'bot' is ever so manly, is it not? :p
    B.O.B., May 17, 2006
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  19. Alexander

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    bot bot?
    Alexander, May 17, 2006
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  20. B.O.B.

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    Better. :D
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