Last Chance To Dance......

you think your the one laying the bait
maybe but we can tell
my rhyming power is takin the piss out out of you
even though i can not spell

so pointing this out is benefiting who
as i sit here and i wonder
by pointing this out is diggin you deeper
your going six foot under

i might not be able to type or spell
but i aint lookin for a teacher
my three year old girl cant spell either
but no doubt even she would beat ya

so if i was you i wouldn't point out
the error's i have made
cos' if you want to not look silly
i'd just put down that spade

your diggin yourself
into a trench that i'm sure of which
with rhyme so shit you'll never get out
AND I'll MAKE YOU MY BITCH






www.owned.com/giveupnow

i didnt grow up in boro my silly frog friend
so that is the first mistake you have penned
as for my colour... i've been in the sun
fingering your sister and botting your mum
and from being a model my face is a treat
and the ladies all want smog's throbbing meat
i was gonna give it the 'im yo daddy' line
but i thought that would be a waste of time
cos i could never let a twat
come from my divine man-fat

Dear smog there's one thing you didn't deny,
the fact you're a paedo is clearly no lie.
Your insults are so shit, practically infantile,
and your man-fat's not divine, we all know you're sterile.

have that !

Is that you in that shit pic?
Looking like a cyber dick.
If so you'll need that life preserver
As you are just an arse observer.

I started this and you did not
You'll never come out of this on top
Your bid to look the better man
Is doomed to fail so fuck your plan.

Your username is rather lame
And this is your one crack at fame
To try and look good on a board
where Justice is The Rhyming Lord.

Is your life empty and sad?
I think so, you're one daft lad
To take the bait that I have laid
and enter my one man crusade.

Against, the shit, the twats, the wrong
That means you, you know which one
If you're trying to impress
Then you are lacking my success.

the paedo line is as old as the hills
i chose to ignore it from my lyrical skillz
and i assure you my seed is full of tadpoles
ready to plunder your mothers 3 holes
now its obvious that you're angry post-trance
so do us a favour and fuck off back to france!

RESPECT TO SMOG!

KEEP ON!

FIGHT THE SHITE!

Smoggles you know that i'm not really French,
but I didn't know that my mam's such a wench!
When I see the dirty old slut tonight,
I'll have to give her a pillow to bite.

If she's good enough for smog,
she's good enough for me,
Frenchies don't care,
about incest you see?

me and you once had a tussle
but now they know we are the muscle
so, yes. i will keep on the fight
to rid this messageboard of shite!

haha best one so far, muchos kudos!

you may have started but I'll finish
this thread that you have made
your crack, your rhyme your utter shite
you've no chance of getin laid

you can't pass comment on my pic
of which you have you do not know
the story behind the offending time
so I would just let it go

if I was you I would pursue
a new line of attack
cos your shit aint worth the post
cos' I all way's just come back

my life ain't empty in fact its good
I have all I want and more
so I'll just keep on rippin you
until I finish at four

so if you don't want the pressure of us
by this I mean me and Billy
I'd pack up now and go home
cos your beginning to look quite silly

our slate's too strong for you to handle
just like we've shown before
so save the embarrassment of seeing this
you'd better put us on ignore

cos I can go all day and night
this really aint a problem
and if you continue to reply with shite
you'll never recover from them


one two psyc is commin for you

three four better hit ignore

five six get you crack all fixed

seven eight I'd choose your fate

nine ten better give up then

your a fucking looser,
dont know why your here,
you never ever amuse and,
i think your on the gear,

your so fucking unfunny,
that i have pitty for you,
you say you dont do men but i rekon you do.

your rhymes are pathetic,
your jokes are just the same,
at the end of the day cock,
you are fucking lame,

you are so dence,
you could probably make a fence,
you wonder why you are disliked,
its because you are a fucking wench.

i dont like to drag things on,
so i will keep this fucker blunt,
my story ends like this,
psycoholic your a cunt.

so why have you just involved
in thing's that don't concern you
you call mine lame but you can't explain
why I can out rhyme you too

you have no structure
no pattern or term
your just some annoying
unfunny squirm

I might not be the board hero
of this I am well aware
but on this thread it must be said
I'm doing better than fair

so why don't you just take a walk
and find something your good at
your comeback here oh fucking dear
was like a five year old brat

just run along oh little boy
and leave this to the real men
and take justice here along with you
he needs to get out his play pen

cos he just thrown all of his toy
well and truly out his pram
just make sure you bring him back
when he can prove he's a real man

What the fuck is that about?
Apart from just a grammar drought.
Your rhymes are just a pile of wank
So quit the glue and talk to Frank.

Your persona is a total bore
So carry on now until four
I don't finish 'til five thirty
So I'll be here and double dirty.

And back on to your username
A load of shit but who's to blame?
It sounds like a shit psy-trance act
and that photo is shit- fact!

So take your dull, sad cyber life
with four quick slashes of a knife
across the throat then on the vein
and spare us all that is mundane.

Real men!!!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

So funny, its made me speak out of rhyme.

Real men.

You couldn't fill your pants, gimp.

psyc and sean you clueless fools
this thread will be ruined with your verbal stools
so please just stop your witless spree
as you're both unfunny as can be

what the fuck, leave me out of this,
why do u always end up taking the piss.
my poems are great and just as good as yours,
but you clearly cant handle it ofcourse.
you think your a big gun your clearly not,
your wit and your humour...what?

your all a pack of useless cunts apart from one or two,
I wish you would all die or get bird flu.
I know this is harsh but its incredibly fair,
french william thinks hes mint which I cant bare.

Im loving the efforts within this thread,
but im going to be honest...

I WISH WILLIAM WAS DEAD

i'll just keep going till you get better
cos you rhymes are still so shite
if you want i could help you
even if it takes all night

even though you really think
you got one over me
i'm not so sure you know the score
but i must be winning by three

and even though you've got a mate
to give you a helping hand
you both really need to get a grip
you never be this grand

so come on lads just give it up
your on your final pivot
cos lets be frank between the two
you's dont even make an idiot

you've got no chance no none all
of gettin past this round
outlook is bleek, your post are weak
so get out before you drown

i knew you couldn't take it
i knew you would fuck up
you cant keep up your rhymin
so i guess you ran out of luck

and by the way my loser friend
i didn't say MEN but MAN
you couldn't even read the post
i think your out of plan

you can't even respond in rhyme
to every post i make
and this was to ment to be your game
your worthless, your a fake

so just fuck off and go and look
for somthing else to do
cos if you can't play your own fuckin game
then buddy you are through

see i have allways answerd
i've never broke the rules
but you not even quick enough
to try and fool a fool

you might be right i might be wrong
for this i will endever
that it wernt me that give up first
it will be you forever



OWNED

the fact of the matter is you take all day
to make up a post thats incredably gay
half of your verses dont even rhyme
so please just halt your lyrical crime

it isn't an issue that you're on 'ignore'
i just like to look even though you're a bore
you've not been accepted, you're still a cunt
who's tastes and logic is back to front

if you cant see this threads an old joke
to poke fun at deakin of bong eyes and coke
now please leave this thread as it once was the bomb
and let it slide to the forum bottom

if this is the best that you can do
you'd better keep on walkin
and leave the four liner's to justice (who)
so i can keep him talkin

i've come to expect more from you
oh great and mighty smog
but as turns out in this thread you
are just as shit as frog

yeah you may have wrote some lines
that have made me laugh
but other than them there's not much else
that you can really add

so it looks like you shall join the cue
of which is gettin bigger
of people awaiting a ripp off me
an ultimate insult you will figure

it's not my fault your rhymes get worse
im sorry boy's i really am
but to try and get one over me
i don't think you that you can

so if you want to carry all this on
you'd better start approaching
but if you want to do it right
come see me for some coaching

see I can ripp without the things
like corpses, mum's, and fisting
and all the sick vulgarity
in the rhymes you've all bee listing