Last Chance To Dance......

Just not funny, way too long
You've got to sing a brief, short song
Its not your fault that I'm a pro
and you are just a wank-to-go.

I thought I give an answer
to old French Billy's post
he thinks he is a smart guy
more intelligent than most

he's argues so convincing
and all way's thinks he' right
the valid point's he rinsing
off the internet all night

so frenchy take a break son
and release that mouse from hand
your modem's just about done
and you've worn out your broadband

so let's show support for Billy
and help him all we can
and see if he will be able
to get a twelve step program

it good to have the info
to help you fight you case
but to end up talking binary
like some human being myspace

so to the info super highway
I think you should say goodbye
and if you unplug you USB
you definitely will not die


I know it gets addictive
but there's more to life than posting
you could maybe take up knitting
or Anne summers party hosting

I try not here to ripp you
all though we've had a laugh
through all the shit you give me
your really not a bad lad


have a nice day m8

You're not a pro,
just a pansy-ass amateur,
no concept of rhythm
or iambic tetrameter.

You only write them,
short like your dong,
cos you lack the intelligence,
to make them long.

Just gets better....its like fucking 8 mile in here :mrt:

theyve made an otherwise suicidal monday morning come to life

at least I have the nounce
to write rhymes properly
you really aint the best person
to take the piss of me

you "rhymes" are two line special's
and really not funny
they aint even real rhymes
you just a feeble one trick pony

so let me end end by saying
I wouldn't answer this post
cos you got ripped to Tim buck two
by the board member hated most

and as if this wasn't the biggest
insult you could receive
just quit it now and and you'll somehow
save some face at least .




mwah X

Alas you're so far of the mark
With your infantile remark
All the trance has fucked your mind
So as of now I'll stop being kind

And if you think I write them short
its only as a quick retort
So if you think my dong is small
Go ask your lass, she's licked it all.

She loved it more than your pin wiener
Screamed for more each time I've seen her
I asked her why she plumps for yours
while Justice' bone grinds to the core

She said its that she pitys you
And all the things you say and do
But don't fret I'll keep her right
Right now, while you're here spouting shite.

You say 'nounce' while you mean 'nonce'
You can't spell-can't rhyme tranced up ponce
And if you're pissed at my response
my job is done with nonchalance.


* "Tim Buck Too", i think you may mean Timbuctoo (a city in country of Mali)

No, don't thank me.

Girlfriend jokes don't hit the mark,
you think i'm bothered 'bout that tart?
I've been sleeping with another,
the exhumed corpse of your dead mother.

You might think shagging the dead is iffy,
but nothing gives me a bigger stiffy,
than humping your mammy's cold dead body,
for a corpse she really ain't too shoddy.

I can't go too fast,
and can't be rough,
or i might tear out
her half-rotted chuff.

Justice you maybe should join us one day,
you can do her up the bum, you'd like that you gay.
If you come along, please bring your sister,
I love her fanny and can't wait to fist her.

poems about raping a corpse...always make me laugh

I think your response says it all
Got no wit so must appall
It just makes you a dafter cunt
And Justice once more goes in front

Back to four lines,
is that all you've got?
You thought you were good
but i've shown you you're not.

Your shitty attempts
at a few rhyming couplets,
are only enough
to impress tranced up fuck-wits.

Four lines is enough when its smart
You've shown nothing, London tart
You're on some kind of ego boost
But Justice ALWAYS rules the roost

You seem just like a sulky child
Trying hard to get me riled
But now 'Willy' comes the crunch
At least I don't eat cock for lunch.

Justice you twat,
you're your own biggest fan.
No one else here thinks
you're the man.

Give up now,
just stop trying,
you're not only losing,
you're actually dying.

you really think your something
when really your a cock
we all gave you a fair warning
but still you fail to stop

so seeing as you don't seem to get
the message we are sending
we'll have to dumb down to you level
so boy's lets start pretending


I aint a ponce just by the way
I'm happy with being strait
it take more than you to piss me off
I could open the flood gate

and I didn't mean "nonce" just in response
that means "PEDO" you should know
cos as a boy you were Newcastle's toy
at twenty five pence a go

but some came back not for your arse
but asking for their cash back
you'd left them sore like as before
you'd better get to the quack

so with your petty little ripps
we've have but just discussed this
we all concur most rhyme that's poor
is that little faggot justice






2- NIL

I thought that you were my best fan
Talking to me when you can
You wish that you could be like me
But you're as shit as shit can be.

I'm afraid of the dark
Especially when I'm in a park
And there's no one else around,
Oh I get the shivers.
I don't want to see a ghost,
It's the sight that I fear most
I'd rather have a piece of toast
And watch the evening news.

I couldn't really give a toss
Your warnings don't worry the boss
And I'll keeping baiting twats like you
As long as my rich blood runs blue.




* Grammatical error
**Spelling error
***Spelling error
****Spelling error

I don't know if your for real
this really is a joke
for rhymes so shit you've crashed and burned
your going down in smoke

so why don't you just give up now
we'll try and make it painless
cos your gettin your arse severely kicked
and your comeback's reek of lameness

just leave it be to frenchwill and me
it's obvious we are better
all our ripp's keep coming on strong
with our piss your getting wetter

you've still not got the process of rhyme
it take more than four lines to get it
it's obvious to me and the board
that your childish rhymes are just shit

You're just riding my shirt tails
Your bid for wit just fails and fails
For if you look within this thread
You'll see that Justice is ahead.

Try to be the smarter man
and admit defeat while you can
As for going 'down in smoke'
The phrase is 'up' you cyber joke.

I wish you'd listened while at school
Your spelling makes you a dumb fool
I wonder what you do for work
McDonalds as a burger clerk?