Paul Shepherd - Up So High Hey people just produced a new track and put a clip up on my myspace. see what you think www.myspace.com/paulshepherd85
verse 01 - that synth sounds well busy mate, knock the arp down a notch or two - its loud as well, could sit in the mix better by bringing it down 20% or so break - not keen on the (other) arped synth being left in for so long (the one that fades out) it could be shortened some what, along with the break, it builds up for longer than (i personally) like verse 02 - beat comes back in too light, not enough happening to tell the difference between the break and the track coming back in, try a stop start or a drum roll to give the listener more of an idea of what is coming - surprises are great, but sometimes tasters and hints work too there you go, very quickly as i listened
jase hit the nail on the head, ur riffs are cool, appropriate name for the track haha uve got some decent elements u jus need to make them fit together, the arps are crazy at points, try and make them softer and i think u shud put more work into your drums and perc, layering, EQ, sidechaining could help. good luck mate
