my poem about trees...

my poem about trees...

if all of the trees, grew money for free
do u think we would all have a stash?
if the sun shone rays of common sense
if true love could be paid for in cash
the fools would have made fortunes yesterday
by selling tomorrows news
"sell your souls & cut down trees"
for the sake of ones and twos
but the wiser men all loved & nurtured their trees
so the roots would grow deep, strong, and thrive
knew their tree would be blossoming every year
with the twenties, the tens, and the fives..

whats this 1's & 2's etc etc crap you always come out with? Out of interest?

lol

peter kay said it mate, few of us find it amusing and nicked it

referring to money obviously..

Somebody shift this to the F******R Forum with the rest if his threads

oh.

Its getting boring

some people actually enjoy poetry mate, so just fuck off.

the only half decent bit

the fools would have made fortunes yesterday
by selling tomorrows news

yeah i didnt post for that reason mate.. read the poem..

its about cutting your chances for a quick gain, but nothing else in life.. or not burning your bridges, and having a life of happiness.. get me??

did u understand it?

its also questionning the human nature of some people.. if everything is on a plate and given away - are we capable of making it last?? it wasnt a pisstake its actually quite deep.

not a very good poem imo, it doesn't even rhyme. I'd expect better from a hardcore mc.

it does rhyme..

mate, whatever i post, in your worthless opinion - its bollox..

1234 Police Knocking At My Door
5678 Yes My Eyes Are In A State
Now Am Looking Kind Of Cowied
Should I Really Tax The Lowie
Take The Chase I May Aswell
Don't Wanna Be Locked Up In A Cell
Take The Chase Is What I Say
So I Did I Ran Away
Out The Back Is Where I Fled
Now Am Buzzin Off My Head

Stay Aware Watch Ur Back
People Will Do Out For Smack
Ther Comming Up From Behind
To Get What They Want To Find
To Help Feed Ther Addiction
Listen Up To My Prediction
If U Ever Try That Smack
I Predict Thers No Way Back
Now Thers Reason For Alarm
With That Needle In Ur Arm
Now Thers Reason To Be Scared
Sooner Or Later Ul Be Dead




hew

my final point..

ur either too stupid to understand it
too thick to see the rhyme (i doubt either of these)
or too arrogant or childish to say so..

but hey

I didn't read it.

Bite.

no. not any more mate.. some time back perhaps yeah, fish elsewhere dickhead.

You replied to my post 3 times. 2 of them were blatant bites.

must have been then