mark pledger - on the edge heres something else im working on its a bit dry in place.... sort that tomorow comments apprec as always streams/right click save as
Its alright mate, but one word.... atmosphere!!! It's completely void of this and thats what it's lacking imo! Not very orginal either, doesn't really do anything unusual. Decent effort though!
Dunno what to suggest, am not a producer or anything myself! But instead of trying to do something quite generic like this have a look at some of the more old school trance which is simpler and should be easier to producer and just get some good rythms and progressions goin and try to put some unusual raw sounds in!
not bad, but it sounds a lot like a simple version of the original. work on your sound design and try to get more from each layer, add some fx/acid to give it a bit more. give the percussion a workover too, its quite simple atm good effort tho
