A breakbeat tune I wrote...

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  1. G.H.

    G.H. newcastlebeats.com

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    A breakbeat tune I wrote...

    Its only my 2nd or 3rd attempt at writing a tune but I'm pretty impressed with the results so I thought I'd see what everyone else thought. Its

    It was made using Cubase and Absynth and to be honest didn't take that long to get this far although its not finished yet.

    www.spectivedance.com/gareth

    then d/l 'Untitled' - Gareth Hocking.mp3.

    Any feedback would be great. (as would any suggestions for a title)
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    its got potential, atm i dont think it really goes anywhere could maybe do with another channel of maybe a violin for a more hybrid style of some more synths of something. i also think that the kick drum could do with being a bit crisper and and im not sure about the snare drum on the every off beat it gives it a 4/4 takes away from the kick drum pattern i feel.
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    G.H. newcastlebeats.com

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    Cheers for the feedback.

    I had been thinking exactly the same thing about the drums, I was thinking of making them a bit clearer, to be honest just didn't want to touch it in case I broke it!! :lol:

    I should be geting the new Reason over the next few days and hopefully I'll sort it out.

    :D

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