http://soundcloud.com/sixpointsix/6-6-techoon-work-in-progress First time i've been on ableton for ages
You might want to take a look at the bit after the break - there is some distortion on the offbeat hi-hat. I think it's being caused by a clicky/zappy noise. Also get the bassline beefed up a bit. Might be worth trying blood overdrive or Izotope Trash (absolutely essential plugins).