Daniel Jobson - Get Up

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    Daniel Jobson - Get Up

    had a free night last night so had a nice 6 hour session on ableton and this is the result

    a bit rough around the edges but i'm liking the general feel to it

    any feedback / comments appreciated as always :)
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    Had a few listens to this now mate, the idea and arrangement are quality.

    production wise the first thing that stands out is the kick isnt quite cutting through, maybe add a bit more mid into the eq and some more compression doesnt seem to fit quite right with the sub but the sounds are there.

    Id roll some of the low-mid off the hi hat pattern and maybe double it up (pan one right/one left) and make a slight change on the eq on each or add some track delay to give it a bit more stereo width. maybe add a shaker pattern in as well to fill out the mid.

    Love the stab and the vocal sprays. with regards to the vox id possibly use slightly less reverb but that may be personal pref and also roll off the bottom end so it sits higher in the mix. Id also play with the panning on this and some of the whiter sounding effects. just pan from right to left so add some movement as it sounds a bit static and work on slightly panning your elements around more to give it more width.

    I dont think you need anymore elements really Id just work with the ones youve got as it certainly sounds full enough. just a few tweaks here and there and youl have a great track on your hands.

    hope this helps and isnt just waffle. defs keep at it mate your deep down track is wicked and with a bit of work this will be aswell.

    Cheers...
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    definitely not waffle mate, good stuff there and a few things there for me to go and work on :up:

    will hopefully have a go at it again at the weekend and have an update uploaded sometime soon

    cheers fella, appreciate it :)
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    cheers mate :)
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    [SOUNDCLOUD]http://soundcloud.com/danieljobson1986-1/daniel-jobson-get-up[/SOUNDCLOUD]
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    updated version in the above post, including some small arrangement changes :)

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